The first image is the final composition I turned in for class and the second is one I altered after critique. I went back and took out the scale changes of the m and c that laid inside other like letters. They were simply too much and distracted from the other reflected letters forms which better expressed mimic. Looking back it was an obvious choice for those letters removed to not have been there in the first place. The redo is much clearer and not so cramped. The simpler form truly speaks better.
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