Friday, December 10, 2010

Past Project Critique (viscom fall 2010)


The first motif was the original direction I was trying to take my "Tries walking backward" motif. It was changed to the second motif in order to portray a more haptic quality. The "Windy winter rain" motif was haptic already and I needed to establish a better cohesion amongst all my motifs. Since I had a set of haptic and clean motifs for the umbrella, I needed only refine my walking motif. The original motif was also more open and not as contained as the other motifs. This was changed by removing some footprints, bringing them closer together, and putting the dimensionality of the motif on an angle.

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